L'écritoire - Atelier 2019-20202024-03-27T08:45:45+01:00Viviane YOUXurn:md5:c05c6c92edcfd160b3ec3d07c57183a4Dotclear9ème séance – Atelier d’écriture 2019-2020 – Mercredi 10 juin 2020urn:md5:e7a754946c36adaa96c728628a7ac2f62020-06-18T15:38:00+02:002020-09-21T10:33:27+02:00EcritoireAtelier 2019-2020<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Thème du jour : « Une envie virale de vivre au vert »<br />
Écrire à partir d’un auteur contemporain, Jean Echenoz </span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p> <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Séance du jour : </span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Reprendre les textes de la dernière séance : le fonctionnement du pastiche, reprendre le style de l’auteur mais aussi la construction du texte.</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Écrire à partir de Jean Echenoz en s’imprégnant des deux premiers chapitres de <i>Courir.</i></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Écriture </span></span></b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">: </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Dégager les caractéristiques de l’écriture de Echenoz.</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:82.3pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Écrire en prenant appui sur la construction de Courir, à partir du paragraphe « Quand tout ce petit monde… » début de page 2.</span></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:82.3pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Développer son écriture à partir de la phrase : </span><span style="font-size:14pt">« Une envie virale de vivre au vert » qui doit apparaitre dans le texte, soit comme titre, soit comme une phrase du texte.</span></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Quelques lectures : </span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:13.5pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:black">Pour continuer avec Jean Echenoz </span></span></span></b><span style="font-size:13.5pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:black">(quelques titres parmi son œuvre riche)<b> </b>:</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Je m’en vais</span></i></b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">,</span></i><span style="font-size:14pt"> une boucle de vie qui commence et se termine par ces mots, je m’en vais, en passant par le pôle nord…</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">La trilogie<b><i> Ravel, Courir, Des éclairs</i></b> sur des parcours méconnus </span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">14</span></i></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, sur cinq hommes partis à la guerre… </span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Vie de Gérard Fulmard</span></i></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, l’histoire politico-policière d’un imaginaire méconnu, une histoire éblouissante</span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Lectures diverses :</span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">L’audacieux Monsieur Swift, </span></i></b><b><span style="font-size:14pt">John Boyne</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, une réflexion sur le plagiat, le mensonge, le vol de la vie des autres pour réussir, ou non…</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Et toujours les Forêts, </span></i></b><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Sandrine Collette</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, un enfant rejeté par sa mère se reconstruit grâce à la nature, il part en ville, le monde explose, il revient à la forêt, reconstruit un monde… Magistral, rien à voir avec la SF traditionnelle.</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Laura, </span></i></b><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Éric Chauvier</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, un fossé intellectuel et culturel sépare Éric et Laura, les fractures sociales qui empêchent les rencontres et l’amour.</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Et m*** ! </span></i></b><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Richard Russo</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, sur fond d’élection de Trump aux Etats-Unis, un groupe d’amis se fissure, un couple se désagrège à partir d’une puanteur qui se répand dans la maison qu’il habite… Réjouissant.</span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Thème du jour : Pastiche déconfiné</span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p> <p align="center" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:center; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"> </p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Séance du jour : </span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Jouer avec les mots : mots-valises (Olivier Auroy) – définitions selon inspiration (Michel Leiris) </span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Pastiche : le confinement à la manière de… La</span><span style="font-size:14pt"> Comtesse de Ségur</span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Écriture </span></span></b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">: </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Créer des mots-valises et des définitions fantaisistes à partir d’un choix de mots.</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; margin-right:0cm"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:82.3pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Écrire un pastiche du Bon petit diable sur le thème du confinement en employant les mots-valises et mots définis.</span></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif">Quelques lectures : </span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:13.5pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:black">Une allégorie moderne de l’enfermement</span></span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Ivan Repila</span></span></b><i style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <a href="http://www.denoel.fr/Catalogue/DENOEL/Y/Le-Puits" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">Le puits </a>(Denoël 2014) </span></span></i><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">– Ce court roman coup de poing, au titre espagnol<i style="box-sizing:border-box"> L’enfant qui vola le cheval d’Attila </i>a été un véritable phénomène en Espagne où il a été totalement épuisé en quelques mois. Deux enfants sont enfermés dans un puits de sept mètres sans moyen d’en sortir. La violence et la force portent la réflexion très haut.</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="caret-color:#333333"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-size:13.5pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:black"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box">Comprendre la contagion et le confinement :</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Paolo Giordano</span></span></b><i style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <a href="https://www.seuil.com/actualite/decouvrez-contagions-de-paolo-giordano-en-libre-acces" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">Contagions</a> (Seuil Mars 2020) </span></span></i><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">– dans un court livre de 60 pages, Paolo Giordano, romancier et mathématicien, déploie les règles mathématiques des contagions pour expliquer la décision indiscutable du confinement. (<a href="https://www.seuil.com/actualite/decouvrez-contagions-de-paolo-giordano-en-libre-acces" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">Accès gratuit en ligne</a>)</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="caret-color:#333333"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-size:13.5pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:black"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box">Pour penser le confinement intérieur de l’emprise subie</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Louise Mey</span></span></b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <i style="box-sizing:border-box"><a href="https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=3&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=2ahUKEwjK_43rgdboAhVSzYUKHRujCFoQFjACegQICRAB&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.editions-jclattes.fr%2Fla-deuxieme-femme-9782702449462&usg=AOvVaw2FTTxOix7nOgHGX4L7Eyj4" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">La deuxième femme</a> (JC Lattès 2020)</i> – Nous sommes plongés avec force au creux</span></span></span> <span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">de l’emprise que vit le personnage ; femme peu considérée, elle trouve son existence dans la place que lui donne cet homme dont elle ne perçoit que peu à peu les déviances. La chance lui fait rencontrer les personnes qui l’aident à s’en sortir, à son corps défendant. Un roman d’une justesse et d’une puissance rares. </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:13.5pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:black">Des dystopies pour penser la sortie de confinement et de crise mondiale :</span></span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Margaret Atwood, </span></span></b><i style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333"><a href="https://www.lisez.com/livre-de-poche/cest-le-coeur-qui-lache-en-dernier/9782264070951" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">C’est le cœur qui lâche en dernier </a>(Robert Laffont 2017) </span></span></i><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">– Suite à une violente crise économique, le « choix » est donné à quelques humains de vivre une vie à mitemps, à moitié totalement pris en charge dans des conditions exceptionnelles, à moitié prisonniers. </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span><br />
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Sophie Divry</span></span></b><i style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <a href="http://www.leseditionsnoirsurblanc.fr/trois-fois-la-fin-du-monde-sophie-divry-9782882505286" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">Trois fois la fin du monde </a>(2018) –</span></span></i><b style="box-sizing:border-box"> </b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Une explosion nucléaire projette le personnage hors de l’enfer de la prison, et il recommence une vie de Robinson dans une zone désertée. Une belle réflexion sur l’individu et le collectif.</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span><br />
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Emmanuelle Bayamack-Tam</span></span></b><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, </span></span></span></span><i style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333"><a href="http://www.pol-editeur.com/index.php?spec=livre&ISBN=978-28180-4600-5" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">Arcadie</a> (P.O.L. 2018) </span></span></i><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">– Une communauté libertaire dans laquelle se sont réfugiés des inadaptés au monde technologique pose la question du collectif et de l’individuel, du rapport à l’argent, de l’influence du gourou, de la relation avec les autres, hors du confinement choisi ou subi.</span></span></span></span></span></span></span><br />
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Alain Damasio</span></span></b><i style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <a href="https://lavolte.net/livres/les-furtifs-alain-damasio/" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">Les furtifs </a>(La Volte 2019)</span></span></i><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333"> – Dans un futur proche où les multinationales ont pris le pouvoir et étendu le contrôle par la technologie, l’armée chasse les <i style="box-sizing:border-box">furtifs</i>, des êtres plastiques invisibles qui se transforment à leur gré. La résistance s’organise. Un roman d’une puissance créative langagière époustouflante.</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span><br style="box-sizing:border-box" />
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Laurent Binet</span></span></b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <i style="box-sizing:border-box"><a href="https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=2ahUKEwiL4aTehNboAhXR3YUKHbPeCdMQFjAAegQIARAB&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.grasset.fr%2Flivres%2Fcivilizations-9782246813095&usg=AOvVaw2dPF2fEuifGd3rqRJtfxL0" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">Civilizations</a> (Grasset 2019) </i>– Et si Christophe Colomb n’avait pas « découvert l’Amérique », et si les Mexicopéruviens avaient « découvert » l’Europe… Un renversement d’hypothèse traité de manière réjouissante…</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"> </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; margin-right:0cm; margin-left:0cm"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman", serif"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="caret-color:#333333"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-size:13.5pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:black"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box">Et quelques classiques sur l’épidémie, à redécouvrir ou découvrir </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></b><span style="font-size:13.5pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:black">:</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Edgar Allan Poe</span></span></b><i style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <a href="https://www.bibebook.com/bib/le-masque-de-la-mort-rouge" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">Le Masque de la mort rouge </a>(1884) </span></span></i><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">– la nouvelle qui a servi de base à la Peste écarlate de London ; face à l’épidémie de la mort rouge, le prince Prospero confine dans son château coupé du monde un échantillon d’êtres sains, jusqu’à ce que la mort rouge revienne. </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span><br />
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Jack London</span></span></b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <a href="https://www.amazon.fr/Peste-ecarlate-Jack-London-ebook/dp/B00HM1QR8E" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box"><i style="box-sizing:border-box">La Peste écarlate</i> </a><i style="box-sizing:border-box">(1912)</i> – un court roman dont l’action se situe 70 ans après 2013, date à laquelle le monde s’est effondré suite à une épidémie qui a décimé la quasitotalité de la population. Les quelques humains restants et leurs rares descendants reviennent à une sauvagerie apocalyptique.</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span><br />
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Albert Camus</span></span></b><i style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">, <a href="https://www.babelio.com/livres/Camus-La-peste/313209" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box">La Peste</a> (1947) –</span></span></i><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333"> une épidémie de peste, allégorie cette fois du courage, de l’abnégation, de la résistance collective à un ennemi invisible (qui n’est pas que la peste) ; un exemple de confinement avec l’enfermement dans une ville coupée du reste du monde.</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span><br />
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<li style="margin-top:0cm; margin-right:0cm; margin-bottom:.0001pt; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:list 36.0pt"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><span style="box-sizing:border-box"><b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333">Jean Giono,</span></span></b><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="color:#333333"> <a href="https://www.babelio.com/livres/Giono-Le-Hussard-sur-le-toit/5757" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline; box-sizing:border-box"><i style="box-sizing:border-box">Le Hussard sur le toit</i></a> <i style="box-sizing:border-box">(1951) </i>– l’épidémie de choléra de 1832 utilisée comme une allégorie des tendances viles des hommes ; intéressant pour faire réfléchir aux réactions humaines et au parti pris du romancier de faire de l’aveuglement du hussard une protection contre la maladie.</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></li>
</ul>http://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?post/2020/05/13/8%C3%A8me-s%C3%A9ance-%E2%80%93-Atelier-d%E2%80%99%C3%A9criture-2019-2020-%E2%80%93-Mercredi-13-mai-2020#comment-formhttp://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?feed/atom/comments/15517ème séance – Atelier d’écriture 2019-2020 - Mercredi 13 mars 2020urn:md5:61a9c77ccd37e1feab23b400432936d22020-03-09T16:37:00+01:002020-09-21T10:33:27+02:00EcritoireAtelier 2019-2020<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Thème du jour : Privilégier la concision – une micro-nouvelle</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"> </p> <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Séance du jour : </span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">1. Retour sur les textes envoyés, temps de parole</span></span></span></p>
<p style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">2. Reprise du thème et des conditions du concours Flash-Fiction EACWP Contest (<a href="http://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?post/2020/03/09/ https://eacwp.org/flash-fiction/french/">European Association of Creative Writing Programs</a>)</span></span></span></p>
<p style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">3. Ce concours est ouvert jusqu’au 15 mars.</span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="color:#333333">Les participants doivent présenter un texte de <i><span style="border:1pt none windowtext; padding:0cm">fiction flash</span></i> de 100 mots maximum (titre non inclus).</span></span></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="color:#333333">Le thème est “heure d’arrivée”.</span></span></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="color:#333333">Les textes doivent posséder un titre.</span></span></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt"><span style="color:#333333">4. Réfléchir sur la construction et les caractéristiques d’une micro-nouvelle : </span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><a href="https://blogatelieremanence.com/micro-fiction/" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-size:14pt">https://blogatelieremanence.com/micro-fiction/</span></a></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Écriture </span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">: Entrer dans l’écriture de sa micro-fiction à partir des 6 étapes proposées par le blog ci-dessus :</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 35.4pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><i><span style="color:black">1) La « Petite idée »</span></i></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 35.4pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><i><span style="color:black">2) Intégrer le préambule à l’ouverture du texte</span></i></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 35.4pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><i><span style="color:black">3) Commencer le récit au milieu d’une action</span></i></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 35.4pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><i><span style="color:black">4) Développer le récit autour d’une image puissante qui sera le climax</span></i></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 35.4pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><i><span style="color:black">5) Créer un effet de suspense en retenant des informations</span></i></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 35.4pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><i><span style="color:black">6) Jouer avec les ellipses et les allusions</span></i></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 35.4pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><i><span style="color:black">7) Créer un retournement (twist)</span></i></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Quelques lectures : </span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Autour de la micro-fiction : </span></b></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b>Régis Jauffret</b>, <i>Microfictions </i>(cf fichier joint en annexe en bas de cette page)</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="font-size:11pt">extraits : </span><a href="https://atelierdam.files.wordpress.com/2012/09/extraits_microfictions_jauffret.pdf" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-size:11pt">https://atelierdam.files.wordpress.com/2012/09/extraits_microfictions_jauffret.pdf</span></a></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b>Éric Chevillard<span style="caret-color:#000000; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="float:none"><span style="word-spacing:0px">, </span></span></span></span></b><i style="caret-color:#000000; font-variant-caps:normal; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; word-spacing:0px">L’Autofictif </i>(cf fichier joint en annexe en bas de cette page)</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="font-size:11pt">extraits : </span><a href="http://l-autofictif.over-blog.com/page/2" style="color:#954f72; text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-size:11pt">http://l-autofictif.over-blog.com/page/2</span></a></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b>Femmes…</b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b>Claire Castillon</b>, <i>Ma grande</i> (féminicide) – <i>Marche blanche</i> (enfant disparu) </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b>Louise Mey</b><i>, La deuxième femme </i>(emprise)</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b>Éric Chevillard<span style="caret-color:#000000; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="float:none"><span style="word-spacing:0px">, </span></span></span></span></b><i style="caret-color:#000000; font-variant-caps:normal; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; word-spacing:0px">L’Autofictif</i></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Thème du jour : La fragilité, le mouvant</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Retour sur les textes envoyés, temps de parole</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Écrire à partir de cette expression de Marie Cosnay : « le monde fond et flue à flots ». Dans son contexte, cette expression renvoie à la situation des migrants et des associations qui leur viennent en aide, aux difficultés rencontrées de part et d’autre. Mais cette expression dit aussi la fragilité de nos situations, le mouvant quand nous croyons une situation bien établie, et qu’elle peut ne pas se présenter comme nous l’imaginions, en nous faisant rire si possible.</span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Écriture </span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">: </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:82.3pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Écrire un récit qui intègre cette phrase : « le monde fond et flue à flots ».</span></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="tab-stops:82.3pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Comme d’habitude le récit doit faire se croiser plusieurs personnages, et l’un des personnages doit se trouver face à une fragilité inattendue, qui peut déclencher un rire, un sourire, si possible.</span></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Quelques lectures : </span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Meryem Alaoui</b>, <i>La vérité sort de la bouche du cheval</i></span></span></li>
<li style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Aliona Gloukhova</b>, <i>Dans l’eau je suis chez moi</i></span></span></li>
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<li style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Aurélien Delsaux</b>, <i>Pour Luky</i></span></span></li>
<li style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Marin Fouqué</b>, <i>77</i></span></span></li>
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<li style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Pierre Lemaitre</b>, <i>Miroir de nos peines</i></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Thème du jour : Bonne résolution</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Retour sur le texte de Chantal, Un bandit généreux, pour dégager les dysfonctionnements et proposer des éléments de réécriture.</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Il est traditionnel, en début d’année, de prendre une <b><i>bonne résolution </i></b>qui va guider notre année. Nous oublions parfois de le faire, et c’est dommage ! Nous allons en prendre une et l’insérer comme point d’ancrage de notre récit. Nous oublions parfois aussi de tenir cette résolution que nous avons prise, l’écrire peut nous y aider.</span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Écriture </span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">: écrire un récit qui développe notre bonne résolution</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Quelques lectures : Des constructions foisonnantes…</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Olivier Adam, </span></b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Peine perdue</span></i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Jean Echenoz, </span></b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Vie de Gérard Fulmard</span></i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Patrick Modiano, </span></b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Encre sympathique</span></i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Luc Lang, </span></b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">La tentation</span></i></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"> </p>http://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?post/2020/01/14/5%C3%A8me-s%C3%A9ance-%E2%80%93-Atelier-d%E2%80%99%C3%A9criture-2019-2020-Mercredi-15-janvier-2020#comment-formhttp://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?feed/atom/comments/15184ème séance – Atelier d’écriture 2019-2020 - Mercredi 18 décembre 2019urn:md5:97d91cfc15896f065c7a1b4fb2004cd52019-12-17T10:45:00+01:002020-09-21T10:33:27+02:00EcritoireAtelier 2019-2020 <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Thème du jour : Et la parole se libère…</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Séance du jour : </span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">La parole va se libérer, s'étirer à partir de ces phrases inductrices : « Ça a débuté comme ça. Moi j’avais jamais rien dit. Rien. C’est … qui m’a fait parler. » Qu’elle soit confidences, révélations, l’émergence de la parole, son déferlement parfois, sert souvent de point de départ, d’ancrage à un récit. C’est ce moment de déclenchement, provoqué par un·e autre, dont le narrateur semble se défendre, que nous essaierons de capturer, et de donner à entendre ce qu’il nous dit de l’histoire du narrateur, mais aussi de son empêchement et de son autorisation à parler. </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Écriture </span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">: écrire un récit qui intègre les phrases proposées, si possible intégralement. </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Quelques lectures :</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Sur l’urgence d’écrire, de libérer la parole</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Louis-Ferdinand Céline</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, <i>Le Voyage au bout de la nuit</i></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Anne Brochet</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, <i>La fille et le rouge</i></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Edna O’Brien</span></b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">, Girl</span></i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Luis Landero</span></b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">, La vie négociable</span></i></span></span></li>
</ul>http://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?post/2019/12/17/4%C3%A8me-s%C3%A9ance-%E2%80%93-Atelier-d%E2%80%99%C3%A9criture-2019-2020-Mercredi-18-d%C3%A9cembre-2019#comment-formhttp://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?feed/atom/comments/15153ème séance – Atelier d’écriture 2019-2020 - Mercredi 13 novembre 2019urn:md5:1536293933ec03a26f3d6f9d790d2c5c2019-11-13T16:57:00+01:002020-09-21T10:33:27+02:00EcritoireAtelier 2019-2020 <p align="center" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:center"> </p>
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<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-align: center;"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Thème du jour : Utopie et dystopie… L’imagination au pouvoir ?</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Séance du jour : « Rêvons un peu… Et si le monde était bleu… Et si les jours étaient pliables… Ou l’inverse… »</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><br />
<span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none">Le pouvoir des mots est tel qu’ils peuvent donner corps à des univers imaginaires, nous permettant de penser le monde au-delà des limites de nos référents ancrés dans le réel et les habitudes. L’utopie n’est pas nouvelle : u-topos, le lieu qui n’existe pas ; inventée par Thomas More, elle est devenue un pays imaginaire, où règne un gouvernement idéal. Vulgarisée au XVIII<sup>ème</sup>, notamment par <b>Voltaire</b> (<i>Candide</i>) et <b>Marivaux</b> (<i>L’ile des esclaves</i>), puis au XIX<sup>ème</sup>, à la suite des philosophes politiques socialistes, par les fouriéristes (phalanstères), elle connait un nouvel essor avec la crainte de la déshumanisation provoquée par le monde industriel et technique. Deux ouvrages importants publiés aux États-Unis au XX<sup>ème </sup>siècle sont revenus récemment à la mode : <i>Le Meilleur des Mondes</i>, de <b>Aldous Huxley</b> (brandi comme une alternative au gouvernement de Trump) et <i>1984</i>, de <b>Georges Orwell</b> ; les prévisions, mais surtout le vocabulaire, contenus dans ces deux ouvrages irradient le langage technocratique et critique contemporain, à tel point qu’ils peuvent être revendiqués aussi bien par des courants conservateurs que par les héritiers de la pensée de leurs auteurs. Le mot « dystopie », mot anglais qui désigne une utopie qui dysfonctionne, envahit nos lexiques. Et cet univers « dystopique », autrefois limité à un genre circonscrit, la science-fiction, envahit la littérature. </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none">Et si nous y trouvions un moyen de tordre la réalité, et de donner place à notre imagination pour inventer un monde où les rapports de pouvoir seraient différents ? </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Écriture </span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">: écrire un récit qui s’inscrit dans la phrase proposée, soit en la reprenant intégralement, soit en la tordant, en faisant un support d’imagination qui nous permette d’inventer une utopie ou une dystopie. </span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="font-size:14pt">Quelques lectures :</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Margaret Atwood, </b><i>La Servante écarlate – C’est le cœur qui lâche en dernier Les testaments</i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Laurent Binet</b>, <i>Civilizations</i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Sophie Divry</b>, <i>Trois fois la fin du monde</i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Alain Damasio</b>, <i>Les furtifs</i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Lionel Shriver, </b><i>Tout ça pour quoi</i></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Emmanuelle Bayamack-Tam</b><span style="font-size:14pt">, </span><i>Arcadie</i></span></span></li>
</ul>http://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?post/2019/11/13/3%C3%A8me-s%C3%A9ance-%E2%80%93-Atelier-d%E2%80%99%C3%A9criture-2019-2020-Mercredi-13-novembre-2019#comment-formhttp://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?feed/atom/comments/15072ème séance – Atelier d’écriture 2019-2020 - Mercredi 16 octobre 2019urn:md5:bd0c5ce9c380f616fd63f37c3676282b2019-10-16T11:53:00+02:002020-09-21T10:33:27+02:00EcritoireAtelier 2019-2020 <p align="center" style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:center"> </p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"> </p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Thème du jour : Question de saison…</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Séance du jour : polysémie et description </span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="font-size:14pt">« Avec cette saison… » Phrase banale, entendue comme salutation, un matin où, certes il faisait doux, mais le froid reviendrait, et la saison a été bonne, une autre redémarre, et les feuilles jaunissent… Autant d’emplois d’un même mot qui à la fois créent la confusion et la puissance langagière. Polysémie et complexité : comment utiliser la polysémie pour raconter, décrire ?</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Retour sur les textes envoyés</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Écriture </span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">: écrire un récit qui use de la polysémie, soit en créant une confusion dans le dialogue entre personnages, soit en installant la polysémie au cœur d’une description (lieu, paysage…). Les deux polysémies peuvent aussi être associées…</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="font-size:14pt">Quelques lectures :</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Jonathan Coe</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, <i>Le cœur de l’Angleterre</i></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Laurent Binet</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, <i>Civilizations</i></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Jean-Philippe Toussaint</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, <i>La clé USB</i></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Frédéric Joly</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, <i>La langue confisquée</i></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Olivier Guez, </span></b><i><span style="font-size:14pt">Le siècle des dictateurs</span></i></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; text-align:start; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px"> </p>http://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?post/2019/10/16/2%C3%A8me-s%C3%A9ance-%E2%80%93-Atelier-d%E2%80%99%C3%A9criture-2019-2020-Mercredi-16-octobre-2019#comment-formhttp://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?feed/atom/comments/15011ère séance - Atelier 2019-2020urn:md5:ac05dd295b3d6ca229ef3c75578336132019-09-18T12:13:00+02:002020-09-21T10:33:27+02:00EcritoireAtelier 2019-2020<p>Mercredi 18 septembre 2019</p> <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Thème du jour : Questions de point de vue…</span></b></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Séance du jour - rappels : </span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">Point de vue, énonciation, focalisation</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Le point de vue peut désigner « vulgairement » le jugement, l’appréciation, l’opinion. Ainsi, la narratrice-personnage central du roman de <b>Sophie Bassignac</b>, <i>Le plus fou des deux</i>, écrit à propos de sa sœur : « Elle et moi n’avons pas eu la même enfance. […] Il faudra que je lui explique que nous n’avons pas eu les mêmes parents… » Cette affirmation se présente comme un point de vue qui représente un jugement, une appréciation…</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Mais le point de vue désigne aussi, dans l’analyse littéraire de la fiction :</span></span></span>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">L’énonciation : qui parle, qui narre, qui prend en charge le récit ?</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">La focalisation : qui voit ? quel regard et quelle place le narrateur choisit-il ?</span></span></span></li>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Auteur</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">/<b>narrateur/personnage/lecteur</b> : l’auteur, qui écrit, extérieur au texte, s’inscrit dans un système d’énonciation sur lequel il joue :</span></span></span>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Son narrateur, qui narre et prend en charge le récit, peut être peut être implicite (ex. <b>Flaubert, Stendhal, Viguier, Reinhardt</b>dans les exemples joints), ou représenté dans le texte (s’incarner dans un personnage, cf. ci-dessous).</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Ce (ou ces) personnage, chargé de la narration, devient personnage-narrateur, cette position influe sur la perception des autres personnages (<b>David Diop</b>, <i>Frère d’Âme</i> ;<b>Sophie Bassignac</b>, <i>Le plus fou des deux</i>). </span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Le narrateur peut être multiple, avec des changements récurrents (<b>Thierry Beinsteingel</b>, <i>Ils désertent</i>) ou beaucoup plus fréquents (<b>Alain Damasio</b>, <i>Les furtifs</i>, qui emploie des signes typographiques)</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Le lecteur peut être impliqué explicitement, il peut s’agir d’une adresse au lecteur quand il est directement interpelé par le narrateur (ex. <i>Jacques le Fataliste</i>, <b>Diderot</b>), ou de considérations générales que l’auteur fait porter au narrateur (ex. <b>Victor Hugo</b>).</span></span></span></li>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Focalisation/vision</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt"> : elle va déterminer la part d’objectivité ou de subjectivité choisie par l’auteur dans son énonciation.</span></span></span>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">La <b>focalisation zéro</b>, ou <b>point de vue omniscient</b>(regard de Dieu) : le narrateur est partout, il n’est pas un personnage, il voit depuis tous les angles et sait ce que pensent et ressentent tous les personnages (roman classique, <b>La Fayette, Balzac, Hugo</b>…)</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">La <b>focalisation externe</b>, le regard de personne : l’objet est toujours connu de l’extérieur, il donne l’illusion que personne ne regarde (<b>Hemingway, Steinbeck</b>, Nouveau roman en France : <b>Robbe-Grillet, Butor</b>…)</span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">La <b>focalisation interne</b>, le regard singulier : le foyer est placé dans la conscience d’un sujet-témoin à partir de laquelle le lecteur connait les pensées et sensations du personnage ; ce sujet-témoin peut être pris en charge par un narrateur implicite (<b>Stendhal, Flaubert, Viguier, Reinhardt</b>), ou par un narrateur-personnage (<b>Beinsteingel , Diop, Damasio, Bassignac</b>) </span></span></span></li>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14pt">Ces deux dimensions du point de vue narratif (énonciation et vision) déterminent la perception du lecteur et sont soumises à des choix d’auteur préalables et/ou concomitants à l’écriture.</span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Séance du jour – écriture</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt"> : <b>Ordre et fortuit.</b>« Un silence parfait est venu avec la nuit. Tout est en ordre, enfin. » Silence et ordre parfaits ouvrent des interstices au hasard, à l’inattendu, au fortuit. À partir de cette phrase finale du roman de <b>Sophie Bassignac</b>, imaginer un récit qui laisse la place au hasard… Bien sûr en choisissant un point de vue (narrateur, focalisation)…</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="font-size:14pt">Quelques lectures :</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Karine Tuil</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">,<i>Les choses humaines</i></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Cécile Coulon</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">,<i>Une bête au paradis</i></span></span></span></li>
<li style="text-align:justify; margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 36pt"><span style="font-size:12pt"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b><span style="font-size:14pt">Sophie Bassignac</span></b><span style="font-size:14pt">, <i>Le plus fou des deux</i></span></span></span></li>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none"><span style="font-size:14pt">À suivre…</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; -webkit-text-stroke-width:0px; text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:medium"><span style="font-family:Calibri, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color:#000000"><span style="color:#000000"><span style="font-style:normal"><span style="font-variant-caps:normal"><span style="font-weight:normal"><span style="letter-spacing:normal"><span style="orphans:auto"><span style="text-transform:none"><span style="white-space:normal"><span style="widows:auto"><span style="word-spacing:0px"><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust:auto"><span style="text-decoration:none">Prochaines dates : 16 octobre – 13 novembre – 11 décembre – 15 janvier – 12 février – 11 mars – 8 avril – 13 mai – 10 juin</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></span></p>http://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?post/2019/09/18/1%C3%A8re-s%C3%A9ance-Atelier-2019-2020#comment-formhttp://ecritoire.chateaudavanton.com/index.php?feed/atom/comments/1492